“Gold and Blue and Gray” Summed Up So Far

Okay here goes.

PROLOGUE: Kyle’s watching TV and hear’s whimpering at the door;  Molly the dog (whom Kyle seems to recognize) attacks and rips his face off which results in him becoming dog-like;  moving twenty minutes into the past we see Dani having an argument with someone on the comp who then busts through the door and turns out to be a tentacle monster-lady;  just after this moment at a public pool some ways away a beam of light shines through the window into the water from which Molly bursts out like the Lady of the Lake, and takes off down the road towards Kyle’s house (which results in what happened on the first page);

getting back to the present, Dani’s being spanked by the monster-lady on the roof and Kyle and Molly show up to rescue her;  a fight ensues and Molly is anally probed, turning her into an evil puppet-dog;  Kyle summons some unknown strength and turns his dick into a snake which promptly forces its way down the evil lady’s throat;  Kyle is swung by his snake-dick mouth-first into a roof shard as his snake dick rips the lady’s skeleton out;  sometime later Molly (apparently still feeling twinges of evil) rips Dani’s head off as the lady’s skeleton goes down on her;  Kyle is now wandering around the highway (still dog-like) and gets run over.

CHAPTER 1: We switch perspective to a man named Glory Trends who travels through an unnamed city to his apartment;  through prompts directed at the reader we learn he actually lives in Hell (also called “Mr. Pickwick’s AppleCore);  arriving home he wastes no time having consensual sex with some unnamed dude and woman;  the dude begins hallucinating that he is back at his 10th or 11th or somethingth birthday party while still getting fucked;  a clown shows up who shoves a dildo down his throat;  he murders the clown with a hammer in retaliation, only to snap out of the hallucination and realize the “clown” was in fact the woman in the room with Glory and him;  Glory seems unaffected by this by saying he’ll soon be late for work at the hospital (his doctor’s head-reflecting thingy implying he’s a doctor);

We switch perspective yet again to an apparent music video of the Spanish Inquisition singing a gangsta rap;  they begin torturing people as they’ve been known to do to procure “confessions” and whatnot though their reasoning here is not explained;  we switch back and forth between this “music video” and the Taxi that’s taking Glory, the guy who killed the girl, and the girl’s corpse to the hospital;  back with the Spanish Inquisition we see a large symbol in the wall (apparently their insignia, though it contains hypodermic needles) with the words “waiting room” above it; as Glory and the gang get to the hospital the guy with the hammer is dragged away by more Inquisition people to be killed or whatever;  the girl has apparently come back to life (which seems strange but we are in Hell right?) and we quickly realize that she is Glory’s daughter (incest what) and as the hospital door slams behind Glory the same symbol from the music video is displayed (along with all the Inquisition people this means the Spanish Inquisition apparently runs this hospital);

Cut to Dani who has (kind of) woken up in a hospital bed;  a doctor and nurse begin discussing her case which moves us back to the original “scene of the crime” (being where the fight broke out and Dani, the lady, and Molly were killed); here we meet Murphy for the first time;  he asks questions and seems to know more than he should (like when he says Kyle must have “found a way in”); then we see Kyle wake up on a toilet in some bathroom somewhere;  the perspective now begins switching between these three people at a faster and faster rate;  the doctor and nurse have an increasingly hostile discussion mentioning “conditioning” for Dani which culminates with the nurse sucking the doctor’s head up into her bajingo;  Kyle slowly remembers what happened and feels increasingly threatened in this surreal toilet as a giant tongue wriggles out and cleans his ass and he looks out the window;  and Murphy tells detective Johnson to follow him and they head to a “youth asylum” where he pays the attending to bring him to a room with a girl they can use (and probably one nobody will care much about);

we stay with Murphy for the remainder as he begins some type of ritual (taking off the girl’s clothes, hooking her up to a machine, and tying her up) and after Johnson dissents Murphy cuts his twig and berries off to use as the “key” to the portal (he also mentions some type of beast); coming back to all three perspectives, Dani is approached by the doctor and nurse menacingly;  Kyle gets to the bathroom door and opens it;  and Murphy uses the key to open the portal;  we end on three full-pages depicting Dani beginning to receive the conditioning by the doctor, nurse, and Inquisition guy;  Kyle makes it out of the bathroom onto a hillside road overlooking the city of Dis, and spots an ethereal vision of Dani;  and Murphy’s portal opens wide to a giant monster head which begins to swallow him whole, thus completing the incantation and sending him on his way to “The AppleCore” or Hell as it is also known.

That was more for me than you.  Just wanted to write it all down to make sure this is panning out like I want.  And if I’ve been doing a bad job of making the comic at least slightly coherent then this should help probably.  And yeah I’m late on the last page this week but look at it this way:  Sunday will make seven days since Monday when I started, so if I get it up by tomorrow than I’ll still have made five in a week.  I’m pretty happy with my performance and I don’t want to skimp on a chapter title page, so we’ll see how it goes.  Definitely up by Monday, though.  And I plan on continuing this pace (not quite as feverishly but in general) which is why I did it in the first place.  Wanted to prove to myself I could and knew it would probably help my fight against procrastination.

Uhh once I get the Chapter 2 title page down I’ll need some time to work out the finer details of the chapter so I’ll begin redoing the prologue and half of Chapter one until I’m ready for Two.  I’m EXCITED!  And I’ll have some details on me posting these and OTHER COMICS on another sight called FlyingOskar.com.  But more on that tomorrow.  And possibly a Chapter page tomorrow.  So keep coming back.

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