Starting Over

Gold and Blue and Gray

I must say my output is getting better.  Well here’s the first two pages completely redone with a fountain pen.  What do you think?  I’ll leave the originals on the “GBG” page till Friday, in case you want to compare.  The lines are much, much better like this.  Also if you’ll notice I’m changing a few finer details, like establishing in subtle ways that Dani and Kyle are lovers earlier on.  I think it will make the overall flow better.

Check for more details and whatnot.  I’m a little burned out right now with all the constant drawing, so I’ll leave it at that.  New Zine details and a cover Friday.


2 Responses to “Starting Over”

  1. What do I think? I think you’re doing a fine job indeed.

    Also, I love dogs.

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